"Paul Dean" <paul_ng RemoveThis @redeemed.org.uk> wrote in message
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> I think he means the last page, which is a monologue by the excession
> itself. It has some weird words and imagery. I think the point is
> that it can't be translated.
It's really not that obscure.
"call me highway call me conduit call my lightning rod scout catalyst
observer"
The Excession is listing its main functions. "highway" and "conduit" are
pretty obvious; the Excession is a means for travelers to pass from one
universe to another, as the Culture has hypothesized. "scout" and
"observer"; well, the Excession obviously observed the local part of our
universe where it appeared, for reasons that it mentions later. "lightning
rod" and "catalyst" are a bit tougher, but you can make up your own theories
for those. The main question is whether the Excession is listing part of
its universe-connecting function, or whether it means that it's catalyzing
something in the local social situation. By guess is the first.
"call me what you will i was there when i was required"
The Excession is mainly motivated by its task or job, it seems.
"through me passed the overarch bedeckants in their great sequential
migration across the universes of [no translation] the marriage parties of
the universe groupings of [no translation] and the emissaries of the lone
bearing the laws of the new from the pulsing core the absolute center of our
nested home"
The Excession is referring to the set of nested universes with a Big Bang
going off in the center that features in Culture universe cosmology. The
"overarch bedeckants" and the other parties mentioned all sound like
varieties of what the Culture might call equiv-tech cultures; different
groups that all know enough to know how to use the Excession to travel from
one universe to another. Marriage parties and emissaries are mentioned, but
are both probably figurative or philosophical roles rather than literal
ones. "Overarch bedeckants" comes from two actual words; "overarching" can
mean either "forming an arch overhead" or "dominating or embracing all
else", "bedeck" means "to clothe with finery" (Merriam-Webster). The
Excession referring to the set of universes as "our nested home" makes it
clear that these groups live there, travel from one universe to another is
routine for them.
"all this the rest and the others I received as i was asked and transmitted
as i was expected without fear favor or failure"
The Excession views its main purpose as the carrying out of its job or task
of transportation for all comers (all comers who know enough about
inter-universal travel, that is).
"and only in the final routing of the channel i was part of did i discharge
my duty beyond normal procedures"
Now we get to the plot of the book.
"when i moved from a position where my presence was causing conflict in the
micro-environment concerned (see attached)
The Excession, as we already guessed, realized that people were about to
start fighting over it. Of course its location is a "micro-environment";
it's a small part of one galaxy in one universe. Note that the Excession
has someone to make reports to.
"considering it prudent to withdraw and reposition myself and my
channel-tract where for some long time at least it was again unlikely i
would be discovered"
The Excession just moved its apparent position from one place in our
universe to another, because it didn't want to cause trouble.
"the initial association with the original entity _peace makes plenty_ and
the (minor) information-loss ensuing was not as i would have wished but as
it represented the first full such liaison in said micro-environment i
assert hereby it fell within acceptable parameters"
The Excession treats what we would think of as death as information-loss,
since if it has a full mind-state pattern for someone, it can always just
make a copy of them anyway (and it considers perfect copies to be equivalent
to the original). Here it's confirmed that the Excession is not really
bloodthirsty or expansionist, it regrets having to destroy the entities that
were trying to probe it. Note that this bit of its report, amusingly, is
what is currently known as CYA.
"i present the entity _peace makes plenty_ and the other above-mentioned
collected / embraced / captured / self-submitted entities as evidence of the
environment's general demeanor within its advanced / chaotic
spectrum-section"
The Excession has captured (recreated from their mind-states) a grab bag of
what the Culture would call Involveds (that's what advanced / chaotic
spectrum-section means). Some really were self-submitted, like the _Gray
Area_ and the _Sleeper Service_. _peace makes plenty_ gets pride of place
because it was first captured, apparently.
"and urge that they be observed and studied free"
i.e. free to move about within the Excession's interior, or within its
associated civilization(s), presumably. The entities are going to be
recreated as entities, not just studied as inactive mind-states.
"with the suggested proviso that any return to their home environment is
potentially accompanied by postassociation memory confiscation"
i.e. if they want to go home, they'll have their memories of the interior of
the Excession blanked out.
"in the linked matter of the suitability of the relevant inhabitants of the
micro-environment for (further or ordered) communication or association it
is my opinion that the reaction to my presence indicates a fundamental
unreadiness as yet for such a signal honor"
As the Minds discussing the incident afterwards guessed, the irresponsible
plot had helped to convince the Excession that the Culture and other local
Involveds were not yet ready for contact.
"lastly in recognition of the foregoing i wish now to be known hereafter as
_the excession_
thank you
end"
The Excession has taken a name from this incident. I found this to be the
single most interesting part of this page, because almost everything else is
just a confirmation of what some character has already guessed at previously
in the book. It implies that the excession is not as "liberated" as the
Culture's Minds, perhaps considered by its society to be more like what the
Culture would consider an AI. It didn't have a name to change, it adopted a
name where it had none. Did the Culture inadvertently start something?
Also note that this kind of thing must be fairly unusual for the Excession,
or it wouldn't be recognizing it in this way. In most of its universal
linkings, it probably doesn't get noticed by the locals.
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