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L Alpert

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(Msg. 1) Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:23 am
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I usually go back and reread a few of my favorite books every few years, as
perspectives can change over time (and memory fades!).

I noticed that in the Second Foundation book something that didn't really
stick out the last few times I have read it, but for some reason this time
it is peculiar.......(this may have been discussed before in this group)....

Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the age of 14) eventually let's in a
visitor through her window after some discussion. After she let's him in,
there is a reference that she makes to having a "baseball bat" under her
bed, which is why she wasn't too concerned about letting a stranger in
through her window.

The reference of a baseball bat in this supposed timeframe just seemed so
out of place. I would think it would be part of a long forgotten part of
human history along with the origins of mankind, or something of this
nature.

It just kind of jumped out at me this time and I keep replaying it over in
my mind, and it seems just as odd every time......

I guess the reference just seemed so out of place.....(again, maybe it's
just me). Did anyone else find this reference odd?

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(Msg. 2) Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 1:12 pm
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"L Alpert" <alpertl RemoveThis @xxgmail.com> writes:

>Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the age of 14) eventually let's in a
>visitor through her window after some discussion. After she let's him in,
>there is a reference that she makes to having a "baseball bat" under her
>bed, which is why she wasn't too concerned about letting a stranger in
>through her window. [ ... ]

>I guess the reference just seemed so out of place.....(again, maybe it's
>just me). Did anyone else find this reference odd?

It is odd, yes. Baseball in a recognizable form has only been
around since the 1840s; to think it's going to survive for 25,000 years
is ... straining things, certainly. Even cricket only goes back to the
time of King George III's father, really. Tennis was played as far back
as the time of King Henry V, but the game was rather different.

Ultimately, I think this has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire
to not throw in ``call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp'' references, the way he didn't
put in silly made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.
In the introduction to the Silverberg co-authored Nightfall he mentions
asking the reader to think of it as part of the translation process, the
way the rest of the language is translated into late 20th century versions
except for things like personal names that shouldn't be transformed.

He did a similar thing in 'Forward the Foundation', where it's a
rather important plot point that a character thinks she heard ``lemonade
death''.

It does still come across weird. You don't want the readers to
waste time looking at things that just don't matter, and certainly if the
language of the Galactic Empire 25,000 years from now can be changed into
contemporary English for the other 145,998 words in the story you can go
the remaining two, but there *is* something to be said for the atmosphere
of smeerp words. I suppose it matters which words feel like they're tied
too closely to contemporary culture and which words feel like versions
ought to exist in alternate languages.

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(Msg. 3) Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:14 pm
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Joseph Nebus wrote:
> "L Alpert" <alpertl.RemoveThis@xxgmail.com> writes:
>
>> Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the age of 14) eventually let's in
>> a visitor through her window after some discussion. After she let's
>> him in, there is a reference that she makes to having a "baseball
>> bat" under her bed, which is why she wasn't too concerned about
>> letting a stranger in through her window. [ ... ]
>
>> I guess the reference just seemed so out of place.....(again, maybe
>> it's just me). Did anyone else find this reference odd?
>
> It is odd, yes. Baseball in a recognizable form has only been
> around since the 1840s; to think it's going to survive for 25,000
> years is ... straining things, certainly. Even cricket only goes
> back to the time of King George III's father, really. Tennis was
> played as far back as the time of King Henry V, but the game was
> rather different.
>
> Ultimately, I think this has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire
> to not throw in ``call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp'' references, the way he
> didn't put in silly made-up words to take the place of distance or
> time measures. In the introduction to the Silverberg co-authored
> Nightfall he mentions asking the reader to think of it as part of the
> translation process, the way the rest of the language is translated
> into late 20th century versions except for things like personal names
> that shouldn't be transformed.
>
> He did a similar thing in 'Forward the Foundation', where it's a
> rather important plot point that a character thinks she heard
> ``lemonade death''.
>
> It does still come across weird. You don't want the readers to
> waste time looking at things that just don't matter, and certainly if
> the language of the Galactic Empire 25,000 years from now can be
> changed into contemporary English for the other 145,998 words in the
> story you can go the remaining two, but there *is* something to be
> said for the atmosphere of smeerp words. I suppose it matters which
> words feel like they're tied too closely to contemporary culture and
> which words feel like versions ought to exist in alternate languages.


With all of the care taken in the verbiage of this series of the good
doctor's books, it does almost seem as the "baseball bat" reference was done
purposely.

In the case of the lemonade that you point out, one could assume that even
after 25,000 years that it could still exist along the same lines as other
items such as apples and water, though these probably would not be
considered as only currently contemporary items (depending on how one
defines contemporary).

There are other instances in the series where items that exist are what they
are now and could conceivably still be in 25k years, such as trees, grass,
insects, animals, etc, as for most of them, the amount of time would be
considered a small amount when thinking in terms of evolutionary scales.

For my latest go round (my 5th reading over the past 30 years), the baseball
bat reference was as you described, "weird", and I agree with your
assessment of it being a fairly recent term of the language (thereby
contemporary).

Within the context of the social systems created in the foundations series,
IMO it is difficult (for me) to believe that humans would still be partaking
in this activity when one considers all the lost knowledge of the "origins"
of the human race.
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(Msg. 4) Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:26 am
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In article <nebusj.1180803542.RemoveThis@vcmr-86.server.rpi.edu>, Joseph Nebus <nebusj-.RemoveThis@-rpi-.edu> wrote:

: Ultimately, I think this [Arkady Darrell's "baseball bat"] has to
: be chalked up to Asimov's desire to not throw in "call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp"
: references, the way he didn't put in silly made-up words to take the place
: of distance or time measures.

To what do you chalk up Asimov's having Preem Palver and his wife speak
with Yiddish accents?

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Opinions expressed are mine alone, and not those of Bar-Ilan University
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(Msg. 5) Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 10:42 pm
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Richard Schultz wrote:
> In article <nebusj.1180803542.TakeThisOut@vcmr-86.server.rpi.edu>, Joseph Nebus
> <nebusj-.TakeThisOut@-rpi-.edu> wrote:
>
>> Ultimately, I think this [Arkady Darrell's "baseball bat"]
>> has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire to not throw in
>> "call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp" references, the way he didn't put in silly
>> made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.
>
> To what do you chalk up Asimov's having Preem Palver and his wife
> speak
> with Yiddish accents?

Upbringing?

>
> -----
> Richard Schultz schultr.TakeThisOut@mail.biu.ac.il
> Department of Chemistry, Bar-Ilan University, Ramat-Gan, Israel
> Opinions expressed are mine alone, and not those of Bar-Ilan
> University -----
> "Logic is a wreath of pretty flowers which smell bad."
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(Msg. 6) Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:38 am
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In article <ctH8i.12413$2v1.11296@newssvr14.news.prodigy.net>, L Alpert <alpertl.RemoveThis@xxgmail.com> wrote:
: Richard Schultz wrote:
:> In article <nebusj.1180803542.RemoveThis@vcmr-86.server.rpi.edu>, Joseph Nebus
:> <nebusj-.RemoveThis@-rpi-.edu> wrote:

:>> Ultimately, I think this [Arkady Darrell's "baseball bat"]
:>> has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire to not throw in
:>> "call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp" references, the way he didn't put in silly
:>> made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.

:> To what do you chalk up Asimov's having Preem Palver and his wife
:> speak with Yiddish accents?

: Upbringing?

Why would you accept that as an explanation for the one thing, but not the
other? By the way, in one of the "Galactic Empire" novels, it is suggested
that the units of distance and time are related to units used on humanity's
original planet, although not everyone accepts that explanation.

If you're going to worry about the Foundation series, you might worry
about the inconsistencies in the names of the Four Kingdoms; in _Foundation_,
they are given as Anacreon, Smyrno, Konom, and Daribow, but in _Second
Foundation_, "Loris" is mentioned as being "one of the original Four Kingdoms."
For that matter, IIRC, the chronology given in _Second Foundation_ is
inconsistent with that given in _Foundation and Empire_.

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Opinions expressed are mine alone, and not those of Bar-Ilan University
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(Msg. 7) Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:04 am
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Richard Schultz wrote:
> In article <ctH8i.12413$2v1.11296@newssvr14.news.prodigy.net>, L
> Alpert <alpertl DeleteThis @xxgmail.com> wrote:
>> Richard Schultz wrote:
>>> In article <nebusj.1180803542 DeleteThis @vcmr-86.server.rpi.edu>, Joseph Nebus
>>> <nebusj- DeleteThis @-rpi-.edu> wrote:
>
>>>> Ultimately, I think this [Arkady Darrell's "baseball bat"]
>>>> has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire to not throw in
>>>> "call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp" references, the way he didn't put in silly
>>>> made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.
>
>>> To what do you chalk up Asimov's having Preem Palver and his wife
>>> speak with Yiddish accents?
>
>> Upbringing?
>
> Why would you accept that as an explanation for the one thing, but
> not the
> other?

I ment the good Dr. Asimov's upbringing. It is highly probable that Yiddish
(or one of the derivatives) was spoken in the home when he was a child.

> By the way, in one of the "Galactic Empire" novels, it is
> suggested
> that the units of distance and time are related to units used on
> humanity's
> original planet, although not everyone accepts that explanation.

Yes, I believe I recall this being somewhere.

>
> If you're going to worry about the Foundation series, you might worry
> about the inconsistencies in the names of the Four Kingdoms; in
> _Foundation_,
> they are given as Anacreon, Smyrno, Konom, and Daribow, but in _Second
> Foundation_, "Loris" is mentioned as being "one of the original Four
> Kingdoms."
> For that matter, IIRC, the chronology given in _Second Foundation_ is
> inconsistent with that given in _Foundation and Empire_.

I agree there are inconsistencies within the stories. The reference to a
baseball bat just struck me as odd, and I guess I was more amazed that it
didn't stand out the first 4 times I read the series.



>
> -----
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(Msg. 8) Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:05 am
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schultr RemoveThis @mail.biu.ack.il (Richard Schultz) writes:

>In article <nebusj.1180803542 RemoveThis @vcmr-86.server.rpi.edu>, Joseph Nebus <nebusj- RemoveThis @-rpi-.edu> wrote:

>: Ultimately, I think this [Arkady Darrell's "baseball bat"] has to
>: be chalked up to Asimov's desire to not throw in "call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp"
>: references, the way he didn't put in silly made-up words to take the place
>: of distance or time measures.

>To what do you chalk up Asimov's having Preem Palver and his wife speak
>with Yiddish accents?

You know, that's a good underlying question, since the Yiddish
Palver never struck me as sticking out unnaturally. Perhaps it's that
I kind of read it as ``they sound like the yokels from the old country'',
something every society will have, so translating them that way gives
the social connotation that Palver was going for efficiently.

I should consider this more, though.

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(Msg. 9) Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:43 pm
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Say, to think of a similar odd reference -- in one of the stories
in 'Foundation' the first book, there's a mention to a Newton industrial
site of some kind (I forget just which).

I've never been sure whether that reflects Asimov just not coming
to the conclusion it was so far in the future that contemporary history
would not even be legend, or just a simple anachronism of naming something
after Isaac Newton, or whether it's a reflection of Asimov knowing quite
well that people insist on naming things 'New Town' over and over again no
matter how the name gets manged in successive generations. (I've read in
at least one source that 'Cartagena' is just 'New Town' in, well,
Carthegenian, and I now and then look over maps eagerly for someplace
named New Catagena Town, and don't go telling me about Hill Hill Hill Hill
because I've heard the story and as I understand it it's not clear that's
actually true anyway.)

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(Msg. 10) Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:38 pm
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Joseph Nebus wrote:

> "L Alpert" <alpertl.DeleteThis@xxgmail.com> writes:
>
> >Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the age of 14) eventually let's in a
> >visitor through her window after some discussion. After she let's him in,
> >there is a reference that she makes to having a "baseball bat" under her
> >bed, which is why she wasn't too concerned about letting a stranger in
> >through her window. [ ... ]
>
> >I guess the reference just seemed so out of place.....(again, maybe it's
> >just me). Did anyone else find this reference odd?
>
> It is odd, yes. Baseball in a recognizable form has only been
> around since the 1840s; to think it's going to survive for 25,000 years
> is ... straining things, certainly. Even cricket only goes back to the
> time of King George III's father, really. Tennis was played as far back
> as the time of King Henry V, but the game was rather different.
>
> Ultimately, I think this has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire
> to not throw in ``call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp'' references, the way he didn't
> put in silly made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.
> In the introduction to the Silverberg co-authored Nightfall he mentions
> asking the reader to think of it as part of the translation process, the
> way the rest of the language is translated into late 20th century versions
> except for things like personal names that shouldn't be transformed.
>
> He did a similar thing in 'Forward the Foundation', where it's a
> rather important plot point that a character thinks she heard ``lemonade
> death''.
>
> It does still come across weird. You don't want the readers to
> waste time looking at things that just don't matter, and certainly if the
> language of the Galactic Empire 25,000 years from now can be changed into
> contemporary English for the other 145,998 words in the story you can go
> the remaining two, but there *is* something to be said for the atmosphere
> of smeerp words. I suppose it matters which words feel like they're tied
> too closely to contemporary culture and which words feel like versions
> ought to exist in alternate languages.

Hari's wife Dors eventually uncovered a plot to commit murder using the
"Elar-Monay" Electro-Clarifier, which was also a "layman-aided" device, having
been invented with the help of a non-Psychohistorian.

I find it amazing that in the Galactic Empire language, the words for "Lemonade",
"Layman-Aided", and "Elar-Monay" all happen to sound the same!
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(Msg. 11) Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:05 pm
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On Jun 16, 2:38 pm, Tim Bruening <tsbru....RemoveThis@pop.dcn.davis.ca.us> wrote:
> Joseph Nebus wrote:
> > "L Alpert" <alpe....RemoveThis@xxgmail.com> writes:
>
> > >Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the age of 14) eventually let's in a
> > >visitor through her window after some discussion. After she let's him in,
> > >there is a reference that she makes to having a "baseball bat" under her
> > >bed, which is why she wasn't too concerned about letting a stranger in
> > >through her window. [ ... ]
>
> > >I guess the reference just seemed so out of place.....(again, maybe it's
> > >just me). Did anyone else find this reference odd?
>
> > It is odd, yes. Baseball in a recognizable form has only been
> > around since the 1840s; to think it's going to survive for 25,000 years
> > is ... straining things, certainly. Even cricket only goes back to the
> > time of King George III's father, really. Tennis was played as far back
> > as the time of King Henry V, but the game was rather different.
>
> > Ultimately, I think this has to be chalked up to Asimov's desire
> > to not throw in ``call-a-rabbit-a-smeerp'' references, the way he didn't
> > put in silly made-up words to take the place of distance or time measures.
> > In the introduction to the Silverberg co-authored Nightfall he mentions
> > asking the reader to think of it as part of the translation process, the
> > way the rest of the language is translated into late 20th century versions
> > except for things like personal names that shouldn't be transformed.
>
> > He did a similar thing in 'Forward the Foundation', where it's a
> > rather important plot point that a character thinks she heard ``lemonade
> > death''.
>
> > It does still come across weird. You don't want the readers to
> > waste time looking at things that just don't matter, and certainly if the
> > language of the Galactic Empire 25,000 years from now can be changed into
> > contemporary English for the other 145,998 words in the story you can go
> > the remaining two, but there *is* something to be said for the atmosphere
> > of smeerp words. I suppose it matters which words feel like they're tied
> > too closely to contemporary culture and which words feel like versions
> > ought to exist in alternate languages.
>
> Hari's wife Dors eventually uncovered a plot to commit murder using the
> "Elar-Monay" Electro-Clarifier, which was also a "layman-aided" device, having
> been invented with the help of a non-Psychohistorian.
>
> I find it amazing that in the Galactic Empire language, the words for "Lemonade",
> "Layman-Aided", and "Elar-Monay" all happen to sound the same!

Don't forget that common beast of burden widely used in the backwater
provinces, the lemac.
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(Msg. 12) Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 2:22 pm
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Mike Stone wrote:

> "Tim Bruening"
> <tsbrueni DeleteThis @pop.dcn.davis.ca.us> wrote in
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> >
> >
> > Joseph Nebus wrote:
> >
> > > "L Alpert" <alpertl DeleteThis @xxgmail.com> writes:
> > >
> > > >Bayata's granddaughter Arcady (at the
> age of 14) eventually let's in a
> > > >visitor through her window after some
> discussion. After she let's him in,
> > > >there is a reference that she makes to
> having a "baseball bat" under her
> > > >bed, which is why she wasn't too
> concerned about letting a stranger in
> > > >through her window. [ ... ]
> > >
> > > >I guess the reference just seemed so
> out of place.....(again, maybe it's
> > > >just me). Did anyone else find this
> reference odd?
> > >
> > > It is odd, yes. Baseball in a
> recognizable form has only been
> > > around since the 1840s; to think it's
> going to survive for 25,000 years
> > > is ... straining things, certainly.
> Even cricket only goes back to the
> > > time of King George III's father,
> really. Tennis was played as far back
> > > as the time of King Henry V, but the
> game was rather different.
> > >
>
> Ditto for the requirement that students sign
> their work by initial and surname only,
> "except for Olynthus Dam, because of how
> everyone had laughed when he did so".
> Evidently they still speak English in the
> 25th Millennium.

Was there a student named B.M.?
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